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1、托福作文写作范文详解题目:Thechartbelowshowsthetotalnumberofminutes(inbillions)oftelephonecallsintheUK,dividedintothreecategories,from1995-2002.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.Sampleanswer:RevealedinthebarchartisthetimespentintheUKfordifferenttypesoft
2、elephonecallsfrom1995to2002.Generally,amongthethreecategories-local(fixedline),nationalandinternational(fixedline)andmobiles(allcalls),localphonecallsaccountedforthelargestproportionofallusage.Nexttoit,nationalandinternationalonestookthesecondposition.Atthebottomofthelist,themobilestookupthesmallest
3、part.(首段概括介绍了图表内容,指出了三种不同电话各自的份额,为接下来的论述做好铺垫)Thetrendsofthetelephoneusagechangedduringtheeightyears.First,thelocalphonecallspeakedatabout90billionminutesin1999,andthenstartedtodeclinetothe1995figurein2002at70billion.However,thetrendsoftheothertwocalltypeskeptincreasing.Nationalandinternationalcallss
4、implyrosesteadilyovertheyears.Themostnoticeablechangewasthetrendofcellphones,whichsoared,alsonever-endinglyrising.(此段分别指出了三种不同类型的电话各自的通话时间量和排名,并指出了他们的变化趋势)InsumzpeopleusedlocalfixedlinesthemostintheUK.Meanwhile,themobileswerebecomingincreasinglypopular.(收尾总结全文,点出了图表最显著的两点特征)满分要素剖析语言表达表示所占比例常用的词组,acc
5、ountfor,takeup等;表示增加降低常用的词组,peak,declinetofrisesteadily,soar等值得借鉴。逻辑结构文章采用总-分-总结构。开篇指出了图表涉及的三种电话类型各自通话时间所占份额。接下来详细分析了其中的数据以及其反映出来的变化趋势。最后总结了全文,指出了图表最显著的特征。题目:Thetwomapsbelowshowanislanctbeforeandaftertheconstructionofsometouristfacilities.Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures
6、,andmakecomparisonswhererelevantSampleanswer:Thetwodrawingsillustratethechangesofthesameislandbeforeandaftertheconstructionofsometransportandservicebuildings.(首段综述原题,对两个表格的内容进行概括描述)Itisclearthatbeforedevelopment,thehorizontalisland,whichisabout260meterslong,hasafewtreesonbothitseastandwestsides.Furt
7、hermore,onthewestedge,asmallbeachiscreatedfortourisminthefuture.Thelayoutchangestremendouslyafterbuildingsareconstructedalongalmostthewholeisland.Meanwhile,thetreesontheeastsidearekeptleavinganaturalview.(第二段描述海岛基本情况,概括发展前后海岛上主体不变的部分)However,thewestsidetreesaresurroundedbyaccommodations,withafootpat
8、hlinkingthemtothebeachwhereaswimmingzoneiscloselyconnected.Nexttothewesternmostaccommodations,thereisareceptionbuildingaroundwhichvehicletracksheadingtothesouthernpierfortouristsailinghasbeenpaved.Ontheoppositesideofthepier,arestaurantstandsatthenorthsideneartheseashore.Finally,thecenteroftheislandh
9、asalsobeendesignedtosupplyhousingfortourists.(第三段重点对比发展前后两幅图中发生的变化情况)Insumzaftercomparingthetwodrawings,thetremendousdevelopmentsareevidentThesechangeshavecausedthewesternandcenterareasoftheislandtobecomecrowdedwithmodernfacilities.(全文总结,指出发展前后海岛上的巨大变化)满分要素剖析语言表达本段中一个长句子之得学习。Nexttothewesternmostacco
10、mmodations,thereisareceptionbuildingaroundwhichvehicletracksheadingtothesouthernpierfortouristsailinghasbeenpaved.首先句子中有一个WhiCh引导的定语从句,先行词是areceptionbuilding.在定语从句中,又有一个动名词后置作为定语,修饰VehiCIetracks.同理,注意下面这个句子。However,thewestsidetreesaresurroundedbyaccommodations,withafootpathlinkingthemtothebeachwhereaswimmingzoneiscloselyconnected,linkingto修饰footpath,而Where引导的定语从句修饰beach.逻辑结构文章采用总-分-总结构。开篇指出了发展前后海岛发生了巨大变化,接下来分别描述两幅图片中的细节,指出了不变和变化的部分。最后一段总结了全文。