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1、托福作文写作范文详解题目:Somepeoplethinkthatasenseofcompetitioninchildrenshouldbeencouraged.Othersbelievethatchildrenwhoaretaughttoco-operateratherthancompetebecomemoreusefuladults.话题和题型分类教育类;双边讨论题型题目分析竞争or合作思路提示A.竞争适应充满竞争的社会争取有限的社会资源树立战胜困难的信心B.合作培养团队精神适应工作任务需求提高团队协作能力SampleAnswerGrowingupinaworldwithanever-inc
2、reasingpopulation,manychildrenaretaughttocompetewitheachotherfromtheirearliestmemorysoastosurpassothers.Althoughthispracticeisembracedbymanyzothersremainunconvincedofitsmerits.Theyinsistthatforchildrentoachievegreaterthingsintheiradulthoodtheyshouldlearnhowtoco-operatewithothers.PersonallyspeakingzI
3、thinkitisbettertoteachchildrenhowtoco-operate,becauseintodayzssocietypeoplealwaysneedtoworkwithothers.(首段开篇摆明观点:双方都有各自的观点,但作者更偏向于教育孩子与他人合作)Thoseinfavourofthecompetitiveapproacharguethatcompetitionskillshavetobeinstilledintochildrenfromanearlyageiftheyaretosurviveintheirfuturelives.Indeed,fiercecompe
4、titionstartsfromprimaryschoolwherestudentsvietogetbettergradesinordertoenteragoodmiddleschoolandtogetadmittedintoaprestigiousuniversitylateron.Thisisfollowedbyconstantpressuretooutshineone,Sco-workersifcareeradvancementistobeachieved.Moreover,insteadofbeinganunavoidablenuisance,competitionshouldbeem
5、braced,foritisthedrivingforcebehindallprogress.Understandably,peopletendtoperformbetterwhentheystrivetobeattheiropponents,whichistheveryreasonwhymostathletesrunfasterincriticalracesthantheydointheirtraining.(文章第二段论述为什么要教育孩子学会竞争,竞争论据一:使孩子能在将来的生活中生存下来;竞争论据二:竞争使人进步)Ontheotherhand,opponentsofthisviewals
6、ohavetheirreasons.Tobeginwithztosurviveandprosper,eitheratschoolorinsociety,co-operationisessential.Noonecansolelyrelyonhisorherowntalentstoachieveacademicsuccess.Infactzmanykeyfactorsthatcontributetoone,sscholasticachievementsuchastheinstructionfromteachersandtheexchangeofideaswithclassmatesrequire
7、co-operationandinterpersonalskills.Theneedtoworkwithandassisteachotherisalsoreflectedineveryorganization,beitacompanyoralaboratory,whereteamworkisaprerequisiteformostjobseekers.Furthermore,ifchildrenaretaughthowtoworkwellwithothers,theyaremorelikelytoestablishapositiverapportwherevertheygo.Byhelping
8、eachothertowardthesamegoal,peoplecanformgenuinefriendships.(文章第三段论述为什么要教育孩子学会合作,合作论据一:在不同环境中,要取得成功都需要与他人合作。合作论据二:利于与他人建立积极的关系)Personally,Iencouragekidstoco-operatewitheachother.Inaworldwherepeoplehavebecomeincreasinglyinterdependent,itisimperativetoteachourchildrenhowtoworkwithratherthanagainsteacho
9、ther.(全文总结,重申观点)满分要素剖析:语言表达本文的语言简洁明了,清晰地表达了作者的观点。本文中一系列连接词的用法,使得文章变得流畅连贯:although,indeed,moreover,ontheotherhand,tobeginwithzfurthermore,personally.ThoseinfavourofthecompetitiveapproacharguethatcompetitionskillshavetobeinstilledintochildrenfromanearlyageiftheyaretosurviveintheirfutureIiVeS.句型Thoseinfavourof.arguethat可用于在议论文中摆出论据。Ontheotherhand,opponentsofthisviewalsohavetheirreasons.句型Ontheotherhandz可用于在议论文中陈述观点。逻辑结构本文是典型的总分总结构的议论文。作者开篇先陈述事实并表达自己的观点,第二段和第三段分别对两种观点进行论述,使得论证更加客观全面。最后一段作者重申自己的偏向。