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1、托福作文写作范文详解题目：Asmostpeoplespendamajorpartoftheiradultlifeatwork,jobsatisfactionisanimportantelementofindividualwellbeing.Whatfactorscontributetojobsatisfaction?Howrealisticistheexpectationofjobsatisfactionforallworkers?1 .话题和题型分类工作类2 .题目分析工作满意度的构成；全民皆满意”的可能性3 .思路提示A.工作满意度的构成感受到自身价值具有归属感团队合作精神浓厚获得成就感具
2、有竞争力的薪酬B.可能性每个人很难找到自己适合的工作知识技能不匹配与个人性格不匹配SampleAnswerNowadays,manyadultshavefull-timejobsandtheproportionoftheirlivesspentdoingsuchjobsisveryhigh.Soone,sfeelingsaboutonesjobfrequentlyreflecthowanindividualfeelsabouthisorherlifeasawhole.Becauseofthis,jobsatisfactionisindeedveryimportantforthewellbein
3、gofthatperson.Factorssuchaspositivefeedback,asenseofprogressionandasenseofbelongingcontributetojobsatisfaction.However,noteveryonecanachievesuchsatisfaction.（首段开篇摆明观点:工作满足感非常重要，受工作中的积极反馈、归属感等因素影响，但并不是每个人都能获得这种满足感）Employeesgainjobsatisfactioninanumberofways.Firstly,apersonneedstofeelthattheyaredoingv
4、aluedwork,sopositivefeedbackfromsuperiorsisveryimportantinthisrespectAsenseoffulfillmentisalsoencouragedifaworkerfeelsthejobisworthdoingbecauseitcontributestothesocietyortheeconomyasawhole.Secondly,whensomeonefeelstheyareimprovingordevelopingtheirskillsthroughtrainingopportunities,forexample,thenthe
5、reisasenseofprogressionandpurposethatrewardsaworker.Thesenseofbelongingtoateamoraworkingcommunityalsocontributestojobsatisfactionbecausecolleagueshelpeachothertoenjoytheirworkinglives.Satisfactionisalsoincreasedbyasenseofresponsibilityforandloyaltytoateam.（文章第二段，较为全面地阐述了影响工作满足感的因素）Ofcoursenoteveryon
6、eenjoystheirwork.Hardeconomicrealitiesmeanthatmanypeoplehavelittlechoiceinthekindofjobtheycanget.Insomecasesanemployeeisworkinginajobthatsuitsneithertheirskillsnortheirpersonality.Somejobsarerepetitiveandboring,andlaborrelationsmaybepoorandleadtoresentmentandinsecurityratherthantojobsatisfaction.（文章
7、第三段，从观点反面展开，论述更加全面，观点表达更清晰）However,eventhoughitisunlikelythatallworkersdofeelhappyintheirwork,itisnotunrealistictopromotemoreworksatisfactioninanyjob.Ifthefactorsidentifiedaboveareimplemented,thenanyjobcanbeimprovedandmoreworkerscanfeelgreaterdegreesofjobsatisfaction.（全文总结，强调观点）满分要素剖析：语言表达本文语言简单明了，段
8、内陈述时，使用firstly,secondly使条理非常清晰，内容一目了然。Insomecasesanemployeeisworkinginajobthatsuitsneithertheirskillsnortheirpersonality.句型InSomeCaSeS可用于议论文中举例论证。However,eventhoughitisunlikelythatallworkersdofeelhappyintheirwork,itisnotunrealistictopromotemoreworksatisfactioninanyjob.句型KiSUnlikeIythat可用于议论文中陈述观点，论证
9、更显客观。逻辑结构本文是总分总的结构。作者开篇先陈述事实并表达自己的观点，第二段分析影响因素，第三段从反面表明并非所有人能获得工作满足感，使得论证更加客观全面。最后一段作者强调自己的观点。题目：Somepeoplebelievethatthereshouldbefixedpunishmentsforeachtypeofcrime.Others,however,arguethatthecircumstancesofanindividualcrime,andthemotivationforcommittingit,shouldalwaysbetakenintoaccountwhendeciding
10、onthepunishment.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.1 .话题和题型分类犯罪类2 .题目分析固定刑罚措施的利弊3 .思路提示A.好处震慑潜在犯罪减少法官的主观臆断简化判决流程B.缺点容易导致误判不利于维护司法公正SampleAnswerTheflexibilityofenforcinglawshasfallenintocontentioustopicsofdiscussionespeciallywhencriminalsarethoughttocommitevilswithgoodmotivations.Naturally,pe
11、oplesviewsdifferfromthecircumstanceunderwhichpeoplewhoincurwrongdoingsshouldbetakenintoaccountonanindividualbasistotheconceptoftherebeingfixedlawsandnotoleranceforanykindofcrime.However,beforetheestablishmentofequalityandjustice,fixedpunishmentsarequitenecessary.（首段开篇摆明观点:固定的刑罚是必要的）Itisabitunderstan
12、dablethatthepreferencethatjudgesaresupposedtomakeroomforthecircumstanceofacrimeanditsintentionspriortomakingthesentenceprevailsamongacertainnumberofpeopleduetothefactthatpeopleinextremecircumstancessuchasdrought,floodingorevenself-defensecommitillegalactsjusttosurvive.However,humanbeings,naturespiti
13、fullymakeitimpossibleformorefreedomtobelefttojudgestodecideonthepunishmentbecausehumanbeingsarebornemotionalandoftenselfish.Asaresult,withouttheprerequisiteofestablishedjusticeandequality,thedaywhenasentenceismadeinaflexiblewaymayneverarrive.（本段是文章第二段，先从反面让步，再切入正面论证，客观辩证地分析）Tobeexact,itmaybebecauseo
14、fthearbitrarylawsystemthatfixedpunishmentsdoworkinmanyaspects.Foronething,fixedpunishmentscanservethedeferringpurposeandespeciallyfillsanindispensableroleinavoidingresistanceorevenriotsinpublic.Toalargerextent,theyareabletofrightenorscareoffwould-becriminalstoensureasafelivingenvironmentforthelaw-ab
15、idingcitizensandwarnthosepotentialwrong-doersintothinkingtwicebeforeacting.Foranother,thispracticeissurelyagreatconsolationtothevictims,forquiteafewofthemfirmlyholdthattheirlossofpropertyorbelovedmustbecompensatedbymercilesspunishmentsbasedonfixedlaws.（文章第三段，从正面进一步论述观点，固定刑罚是对受害者极大的安慰）Allinall,toensu
16、rethatthesocietycanrunsmoothlybeforearelativelyperfectestablishmentofequalityandjustice,anoverwhelmingmajorityofcaseshavetobedecidedbylaws.（全文总结强调观点）满分要素剖析：语言表达本文多处使用连接词，如：naturally,however,foronething,foranother,toalargerextent,asaresult,tobeexact,语言流畅连贯。本文先从反面让步后从正面论述观点，从论证手法上来说，就非常客观和辩证。Itisabitu
17、nderstandablethatthepreferencethatjudgesaresupposedtomakeroomforthecircumstanceofacrimeanditsintentionspriortomakingthesentenceprevailsamongacertainnumberofpeopleduetothefactthatpeopleinextremecircumstancessuchasdrought,floodingorevenself-defensecommitillegalactsjusttosurvive.Itis.that.是客观论证的句型，不带任何个人感情色彩的有理有据的论证观点，陈述事实。However,humanbeingsnaturespitifullymakeitimpossibleformorefreedomtobelefttojudgestodecideonthepunishmentbecausehumanbeingsarebornemotionalandoftenselfish.句型make(s)it.forto可用于表示原因。逻辑结构本文是总分总的结构。作者开篇先陈述事实并表达自己的观点，第二段从反面切入，然后转向正面论述，第三段继续正面论述，正反面论述使得论证更加客观全面。最后一段作者总结全文，强调自己的观点。
